I had said I got nothing when I tried to do this challenge. Then after posting that a first line came to me and a second. Took a while to get the third one right and then the last one just flowed off of my fingers.
Tis said "Home is where the Heart is."
This is only partly true
Your loved one is your true Home
Where your both are
Together or not
Is just a place
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Lovely poem
Thank You.
Very nice. 😊❤️ It was similar for me - I didn't think I had anything, but then a first line occurred to me.
Thank you. It is strange how that happens. For me, I had just snarked to Spunky that his poem was really bad but better than anything I could come up with when that first line came to me .
Sending you big hugs and may you keep warm.
I smiled at the first line...because I knew that it was from your heart. Really sweet.
Thank you. I guess it is no secret that I am a romantic soul.
Sending you big naked hugs,
This is the perfect companion to your post where Diane talked about being "home" with you.
That is where I got the inspiration. I was floored when she referred to me that way as I never had thought of a relationship in that way. Still, when I heard her say it I know I feel the same way.
Sending you big naked hugs and the hope that you find someone who feels that way about you but like Diane and I not wanting to share a house.
Your poem captures the essence of love and what "home" truly means. It's wonderful how inspiration struck you unexpectedly!
Thank You! Inspiration is such an weird thing. I have heard of real artists say about some of what they consider their best work that it just seemed to come to them where too often a work is a lot of work. As I said to Spunky, it is no wonder the idea of having a Muse give you the idea feels so real.
As you know, your poem is far, far better than my poem. Your poem is a true love poem whereas I just cheated and took the piss. My hat is off to you, and not for the first time.
Thank You!
Funny how sometime something can just seem to pop into your head seemingly out of nowhere. I can understand why the Greeks believed in Muses that inspired the best work they did.